Music habits while writing..

I got to thinking about my music-listening habits while I am drafting. With Isla’s Inheritance and the sequel, I either listened to nothing at all (when you have a small-child noisemaker, silence is very restful!) or to Tim Minchin live—one of the concerts with an orchestra.

It wasn’t that Tim Minchin’s comedy music style was particularly appropriate for the books, just that it was the thing I chose when I first started drafting, and I came to associate it with writing those books. I play it quietly—just enough to block the background noise of traffic or people moving around the house. My writing sessions tend to be short by necessity so usually I’d get through the full album by the end.

But I thought maybe when I write something different I ought to branch out, that maybe a new musical style could help me capture the voice for a new book.

Which got me to wondering how other writers approach music when writing. I love stickybeaking into other writers’ processes. It makes me feel more normal. 😉

So I asked some of my tweeps about their writing habits when it comes to music, and here is what some of them said. (Two or three others said they write with silence, or with the TV as background noise, but I haven’t included them here because, well, MUSIC!) I hope you find them as interesting as I did.

If you’re inclined to share, please leave a comment about your approach.

Susan:

So it would seem that, these days, more and more writers are releasing music scores with their books. The music being what they listened to during the writing of said books. To me, as a wannabe writer, this said that if I wanted to write amazing literary masterpieces, then I needed to listen to amazing music as I wrote as well.

I hit upon one snag. I love to sing along to all the songs! Now this wouldn’t be a problem, but I end up spending most of my writing time bopping along to the tunes, singing at the top of my lungs (even when I wear headphones) into an imaginary microphone, and generally annoying everyone who happens to be in the house at the time.

Oh yes, and that other problem, I get no writing done because I am majorly distracted by my singing/miming prowess. However, I have found the solution to this problem. Music with no lyrics. Classical, piano or gothic (look it up on Youtube, some is rubbish, but a lot is inspiring) tend to get my writing juices cranking. I even find that, if the piece I am listening to is particularly moving, so are the words I write while listening to it. (Well, that’s just my opinion anyway, and like most writers, I guess I’m fairly biased.)

Julie:

For me, accompaniment is usually ambient: classical, orchestral, strings, or, my personal favourite, movie soundtracks. Typically I find that if I know the words to a song there is temptation to sing them aloud, and that even if I resist that temptation my mind still goes to words it knows rather than create new ones. With classical this is never an issue!

But sometimes, when the occasion is right, I also select music by scene: hard rock for training or a fight; bass-heavy for a party; indie or swing for the playful; artists and songs that suit a certain character to help flesh them out.

Regardless of what I’m listening to, I often use music engines such as 8tracks that allow you to search for playlists by tag: “epic”, “alternative”, “girly”, “50s”, “badass”, or heck, even “writing”!

Pippa:

For me, listening to music while I write is like having the soundtrack to the film that’s running through my head. It started off that I’d have whatever music I loved at the time playing while I wrote. For my first book and its sequel, it was The Rasmus–an alternative rock band that I’d fallen in love with. With later works, they’ve either been influenced by the latest album I’m listening too, or I’ve started writing them and added an album as the story’s unofficial soundtrack. My steampunk superhero romance has Linkin Park’s Living Things, my gritty space opera The Dirty Youth. My YA scifi novel had My Chemical Romance and Elliott Minor.

At the moment I’m looking at buying some soundtracks from my favourite sci-fi series and films so that I have music without the distraction of lyrics – there’s nothing worse than typing out a really great line only to realise you’ve lifted it straight from the song you were just listening too. Inspiration is great – copying is not!

Carissa:

Mostly, when I’m writing, I listen to instrumental music, so the words don’t interfere. But it has to be just the right kind. Classical, in my mind is too loud and harsh, and movie soundtracks are ok, but primarily for the sweeping, dramatic scenes. Usually I want something that is a more earthy and airy and a little less battlegroundesque.

These are some of my favorite artists and albums for that purpose, listed from most relaxing to most energising:

  • Mum – Finally We Are No One
  • Robyn Miller – Myst Soundtrack (yes I used to play this, yes I listen to the soundtrack)
  • Sigur Ros – Anything and everything Sigur Ros
  • Little People – Mickey Mouse Operation
  • Sunlounger –
  • The Future Sounds of London – Lifeforms  and Accelerator
  • Nightmares on Wax – Carboot Soul, Mind Elevation
  • Bonobo – Black Sands
  • Explosions in the Sky – All of a Sudden I Miss Everything

… also a smattering of things from Buckethead, RJD2, Mark Farina, Telepopmusik, Bibio, Caribou, Thievery Corporation, Four Tet, The Orb and Sia often show up on my playlists. Sometimes I sneak in a bit of things with words, and if I do they are invariably Lykke Li, Junip or Iron and Wine.

Lauren:

When I write, I find I do it best accompanied to the sweet sounds of silence. I’m so obsessed with words that even listening to background music can pull my focus to the lyrics in the song and what it all means. Before I know it, I’ll be so out of my manuscript I struggle to get back in. Silence just works so much better for me. More often than not, the only thing I like to hear while drafting is the casual clink of my wine glass against my teeth (ouch).

However, there is the odd exception to this rule: and that exception goes by the name of Swift. Taylor Swift.

Yes, I know it’s embarrassing, and it’s not like I know ALL* the words or anything, but I feel like she’s the quintessential emotional wreck that a lot of the time my characters seem to be. Whether I’m after a heartache, a strong stance, a romance or a fiery heat of the moment exchange, Taylor is passionate about it and that can definitely put me in the mood to write if I’m stuck in a moment. I just have to make sure my characters avoid saying never, ever, ever, ever…

*All meaning all. I’d say I’m familiar with a comfortable 99%


How do I find a literary agent? (Reblog)

I’ve made comments in passing about how there are heaps of resources on the net, telling you the nitty gritty of how to query a literary agent. Here is one that is a great summary. It’s written by a literary agent’s intern, so she knows what she’s talking about. Read it. Send cookies. 🙂


A wet weekend… and not in a fun way! :p

Going into the long weekend I thought I was going to have a quiet one. I thought I might do some editing or a bit more reading for my new novel idea. I did end up doing both of those things, but only in very tiny portions.

The weekend started really well. The launch post for Aussie Owned and Read went up—my regular reader will have seen me reblog it, as well as the second post (all about moi; go figure). Aussie Owned is a book blog; I’m part of the octumvirate* of contributors, which I’m very excited about.

My new t-shirt, being modelled by someone that is not me.

My new t-shirt, being modelled by someone that is not me.

I popped out to a local nerd convention, where I bought myself a Minecraft t-shirt, then had lunch with the significant other; an introvert’s good day, right?

Then at dinnertime the storm rolled through.

Australia has had some extreme weather this weekend. Queensland, not satisfied with nearly washing into the sea two years ago, thought it’d try again with the fallout from an ex-tropical cyclone. Canberra, jealous, got in on the action with its own storm. We’re not on the coast so our problems weren’t as bad as theirs, but my local area got 60 mm of rain in thirty minutes.

A significant proportion of which ended up in one room of my house.

It washed in through the ceiling and poured out light fittings; it ran down one wall of the room like my very own internal water feature. The carpet squelched underfoot; the couch absorbed so much water it soaked right through to the floor underneath. Later, when the electrician removed one of the wall sockets, water came out of the wall.

Amazingly, the television stayed dry. But that’s about all.

So the rest of the weekend was spent first with buckets and all the towels we and several friends could spare, and then on the phone to the insurance company and various tradies. An electrician took light fittings and a wall socket away; a carpet technician is coming back tomorrow to rip up the carpet; a builder came around to do some quick repairs to stop any more rain getting in. Plus I’ve done about ten loads of washing in the last day and a bit.

Tomorrow I have to deal with the insurance assessor and the bank. That may be worse than dealing with the storm! :p

But despite the shellshock I still feel relatively lucky. We didn’t lose power, unlike others I know—which is good, because mopping up in the dark would have been impossible. We don’t have a foot or more of water through our house and the roof is still attached—unlike some folks in Queensland. And I’m insured, so hopefully the gods of bureaucracy will shine on us and everything will eventually be repaired or replaced.

It’s not much of a silver lining. More like pewter or tin. But that’s why I’ve been a lazy blogger this weekend! Forgive me?

* Possibly not a real word.


Introducing … Cassandra Page

Here is my introductory post from over at Aussie Owned and Read. You could read it for my sparkling wit (HA!) but, more excitingly, there’s a giveaway starting today as well; three Amazon ebooks and a few different edits or critiques from the fabulous Aussie Owned contributors. Gogogo!

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Um. Is this thing on? *taptaptap*

Oh, hi! My name is Cassandra and I’m writing to you as the first (alphabetically; I make no other claims) of the Aussie Owned and Read bloggers. You may be wondering why I’m qualified to write about books, especially young adult and new adult books in an Australian context. So here are a few random factoids about me, which may or may not reassure you. :p

I have a Bachelor of Arts in Communication, with a Professional Writing specialisation. I got my degree longer ago than I care to remember. And since 2007 I’ve been a professional editor  in the public service. (I live in Canberra; of course I’m a public servant!)

I may not be a teenager anymore (at least, I wasn’t last time I checked!) but I’ve been reading books with teenage and “new adult” protagonists for a long time—certainly longer than NA…

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The most terrifying thing a writer will see…

Big call, I know. But I reckon most writers will agree with me. This is the most terrifying thing you will ever confront:

Warning: this picture may shock you!

Warning: this picture may shock you!

Stupid blinking cursor. Stupid blank page.

Come on, words. Let’s rumble.


Welcome to Aussie Owned & Read

Check out this hot new Australian book blog. I’m proud to say I’m one of the contributing writiers. Yay! 😀

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G’day, and welcome to the very first post for Aussie Owned & Read, a blog dedicated to Young and New Adult novels and written by eight Australian ladies involved in the writing and publishing community.

This is a blog for people who read books, people who write books and people who have a passion for all things words. We’d love you to comment on our posts, enter our competitions and basically be our friends; after all, that’s how this whole thing came about!

As anyone who writes or reads knows, the friends you make while writing and reading are some of the best kinds of people. Stacey and Lauren, the blog founders, met through a pitch competition (thanks, Brenda Drake!) and have since exchanged numerous emails, texts and even met in Real Life to share their love of YA and NA books.

Both longed to create a blog where…

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Querying agents. Stiff upper lip and all that…

I’ve been querying agents on Isla’s Inheritance since mid-to-late 2012. When I started I thought I was ready: the query and synopsis were drafted and proofread. The manuscript had been drafted and edited several times, by me and my beta readers.

Then I discovered Twitter and competitions that involved feedback on my query letter and first pages, and suddenly I didn’t feel ready anymore. (Apologies to those first agents that got my work. Please excuse me if I don’t make eye contact with you if we ever meet! The shame—it burns!)

After taking a break over Christmas, I’m back on the querying treadmill. I was going to write “querying bandwagon”, but a bandwagon sounds like fun—maybe coming with an impromptu jam session—and a treadmill, well, isn’t.

There are a ton of good blogs out there about what to do when you query (do your research, be patient and businesslike, etc) and how to write a query letter. I’d share my query letter with you, but until or unless I actually woo secure the representation of an agent, I don’t feel qualified to provide advice!

So this blog post is about how to maintain the momentum when querying. Because those polite little form rejections can wear away your enthusiasm like the ocean eating a headland. (Or, on a bad day, like a hammer smashing glass.)

#1 Exclusives stink

This was probably Miss Snark’s top catchphrase. A famous blogging agent from last decade, she advised that if an agent asked for exclusive rights to consider your query, you just skip them and move on. You might have to send dozens of queries before you get a nibble; do you really want to waste time on one agent who may take six to eight weeks to even look at your query and first few pages? (Some agents will ask for an exclusive on a full request; you could do this, but they ought to respond in a reasonable time.)

I send out my queries in batches of ten (give or take). When I get one rejection, I send out one more query, to keep the number in the field steady. If I get any feedback, I revise before I send any more out. This has one massive advantage in terms of my fragile writer’s ego—if I get a rejection, I shrug and look at the list of other agents who haven’t said no yet. If I’d only had one query out there, the rejection would be far more devastating.

#2 Accept that you will get rejections

Before he got his first book deal (Carrie), Stephen King had a railroad spike on the wall in his room. He’d spike all his rejection letters on it; he learned to treasure the rejections that had even a hint of personal feedback (such as the idea that you should always cut at least 10% from your first draft when editing—apparently he still follows that advice decades later).

It’s a bit hard to spike an emailed rejection, or plaster it on the wall, unless you want to print it off (think of the trees!). I use an email folder instead. Less dramatic, but we can’t all be Stephen King.

I read a blog not long ago that suggested these early rejections are actually a good thing: they help you develop a thick skin. Because even if you get your agent and a publishing deal on your first go, humans are fickle beasts and some readers WILL reject you. It’s much easier to stay calm in the face of a one-star review on Amazon or Goodreads if you have already developed the hide of a rhino.

#3 Follow agent (and intern) accounts on Twitter

Many agents and literary interns will tweet comments about some of the bad queries they see. I like the #playnicewiththeintern hashtag for query rants. Here’s one from this morning:

#PlayNiceWithTheIntern

#PlayNiceWithTheIntern

It makes me feel better that I don’t make those kinds of mistakes. And if I did… well, it’d be a kick in the pants to check, wouldn’t it?

#4 Do other things

Don’t sit and pine, waiting for agents to love you. Do other things. Write something new. Work on establishing your social media presence: blogging, Facebook, Twitter, PinTumbG+, whatever.

Read some of the books you missed while focusing on your own, especially new releases in the genre in which you’re writing. If you’re on top of the current trends you may not be able to predict the next one (I don’t think even agents and publishing houses can do that with any reliability), but you’ll at least be able to avoid looking like a clone.

Go on holiday or, if you can’t afford that, to the library. If you’re going to write what you know, know more!

Exercise: see if you can lose the weight you put on sitting in a chair and eating chocolate. (Ok, maybe that one was just me.)

 
I hope this advice is helpful to you. Now I’ve procrastinated enough, I should get back to that treadmill. Good luck to everyone that’s in the query trenches too!


Yet another blog hop: Liebster Award (oppan lazy style)

The lobster, uh, liebster award.

The Lobster, uh, Liebster Award.

Amber tagged me in her blog hop and said nice things about me (and I’m a sucker for that!). But I’m sort of blog-hopped out right now, so my participation in this will be half-assed. (At least I’m honest, right?)

The hop is called the Liebster Award. I’m not sure why.

Here are my 11 questions.

1. Describe your current MS in three sentences?

In December I finished the sequel to Isla’s Inheritance. As my next MS is still a glint in my proverbial eye (or maybe my actual one), that would be my current MS, I suppose. So here are three sentences on it. I’ve kept them deliberately vague because—spoilers!

Isla begins to come to terms with her unusual powers, but then one of her mother’s people arrives. He reveals a terrible secret. And there is a developing love triangle (who doesn’t love one of those)?

2. What is the most important thing you try to achieve within your own writing?

An easily accessible story. I’m a fan of straightforward prose and characters with a sense of humour. The characters do struggle with bigger issues (free will is a theme in both manuscripts) but they do it as regular teenagers. Some of whom have superpowers.

3. What has been your biggest writing high?

Finishing my first manuscript. It doesn’t get much better than that feeling of OMG-I-ACTUALLY-DID-IT!

4. What are your three favourite books?

I honestly have no idea. I love so many. So I will name three favourites from when I was a teenager. They got me into fantasy and speculative fiction more broadly:

“The Hobbit” – JRR Tolkien
“Dragonsdawn” – Anne McCaffrey
“Magic’s Pawn” – Mercedes Lackey

5. What is the primary focus of your blog?

Writing and editing. Mine and others.

6. Name three interesting Bloggers/Tweeters that you would like to know better?

Err. This is a hard one because I love my Tweeps and don’t want to single anyone out. So instead here are three blogs that I find really useful:

TERRIBLEMINDS: Chuck Wendig, Freelance Penmonkey

Grammar Girl’s Quick and Dirty Tips for Better Writing

Bad Redhead Media

7. What is the single best piece of writing advice you ever heard/read?

Don’t fuss too much over the first draft. Get it down. You can fix it later.

8. How would you sum up your writing experience?

Protracted. I’m averaging one book a year.

9. What’s your plan for publication? Query Agents, Submit Direct to publishers or Self pub and why?

I’m currently querying agents. I’d prefer to go that route, because I’d like to think I’m wise enough to know when other people are smarter/more experienced than me. (As Chuck Wendig wrote today, The agent is there to say, “This clause, the one about eating babies, we’re going to say no to that one.”)

If that fails, then the other two options are plans B and C respectively.

10. What’s been your biggest challenge as a writer?

Finding the time. Single working mum, yadda yadda yadda. My goal is to write 1000 words a week; I usually manage a bit more. For a 70k word manuscript … well, you do the maths!

11. What keeps you going?

Coffee and OCD. Also, my son.

Now, I’m meant to tag 11 bloggers to participate. If you read this and want to participate, feel free. Leave me a comment and I’ll link you in my post.

Apologies for the lazy.


Editing: more things to watch out for

In this post I had a bit of a rant about words to watch out for when you’re drafting or (more likely) editing. I want to add a couple more to the list. Well, one word and one sentence construction.

The word is the humble “of”. The book I’m reading now is well edited, except for slightly awkward sentences like this:

The rage beat inside of my heart.

Every time I see a sentence like this it pulls me out of the story, because I want to cross the “of” out. It isn’t doing anything there except adding to the word count, which is only ok in the first draft of a NaNoWriMo manuscript—but once you’re past the drafting stage, show no mercy.

NO MERCY!

The other construction is more egregious because of the potential to cause the reader to giggle. I heard this one on the news the other day:

Large and out of control, hundreds of fire fighters are working to control the blaze.

I’m sorry, what?!

This type of construction is called a “dangling modifier” (I usually call it a “dangling whatsit”, because that’s how I roll.) I’m sure you can see the problem: by having the modifying clause where it is, the sentence reads as though the fire fighters are the ones out of control, rampaging through the wilderness like Godzilla with a fire hose.

I want it to be true, but I’m pretty sure that’s not what they meant.

Whenever a clause doesn’t contain the subject (like “large and out of control”), make very sure the part that follows immediately after specifies what the subject is. Likewise, if you use an “it” or a “they” (or any other pronoun), make very sure it’s 100% clear what you are referring to. (Or “to what you are referring”, if you want to be all stuffy about it. This is a plain English blog, though, so I don’t tend to bother with that.)

Wikipedia has a good post on dangling modifiers here if you want to learn more.

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Miss Snark’s First Victim’s entrant number 14…

I realise that blog title is cryptic if you don’t know what I’m talking about, but I love it. The multiple possessive apostrophes! The abstract poetry! It’s like a line of random gibberish being used as a secret password in a dusty basement somewhere.

Ok, maybe that’s just me…

Anyway, as previously mentioned I got chosen by the random number generator gods as an entrant in the Miss Snark’s First Victim Secret Agent contest for January. The main goal is to get feedback on the first 250 words of my manuscript. The other is for the Secret Agent (whoever he or she is) to come past, fall in love, and ask to see MOAR WORDZ! But, you know, feedback is good too. :p

The entries went up today; you can find mine here. Feel free to check it out.