Finding inspiration, and ‘In Stone’
Posted: July 3, 2013 Filed under: On Books, On writing | Tags: book launch, guest post, inspiration, writing, young adult 3 CommentsToday’s post is by one of my mates from Twitter, the gorgeous Louise D. Gornall. Her debut novel, IN STONE, was released on Monday, so the first thing I wanted to say was HAPPY BOOK BIRTHDAY!
Massive thanks for having me on your blog today, Cass!
So, I’m here to tell you guys the inspiration behind In Stone. Of course there was music, various breath-taking landscapes and thousands of hours spent searching through pictures on Pinterest. Then there were the emails between me and my CP, as well as the countless 4am brainstorming session with my twin sister. All of these things were inspirational, and the book would have undoubtedly sunk without them. However, if I HAD to single out three things that were inspirational in the pre-writing stages of In Stone, they would be:
1. This quote from Friedrich Nietzsche: “And if you gaze for long into an abyss, the abyss gazes also into you.”
2. Then there was a conversation I saw between two agents on Twitter that amounted to ‘stakes in a story are significantly lowered when immortals are involved because immortals, after all, can’t die.’
3. And then there was the plot of The Lord of the Rings.
I’m not going to go into too much detail because I will undoubtedly—however inadvertently—end up giving away the plot of In Stone. It wouldn’t be the first time I’ve done that. I just wanted to tell you a little bit about how these things wormed their way into my imagination and helped me cook up a story.
So, I think the first point is pretty standard. Who doesn’t find inspiration in a good quote? This one spoke volumes to me. I’ve read a couple of academic articles that all ponder its meaning, but I took it at face value when I applied it to my plot. To me this quote says that if you’re going to hang around with bad guys, eventually some of that badness is going to rub off on you…
The second point was something I’d been thinking long and hard about for a while. I knew I wanted my MC to be an immortal, but I didn’t want my stakes to be significantly lower because of it. This conversation really got me thinking about how I could avoid compromising my stakes, and that in turn helped me to develop a huge element in my plot.
Finally, The Lord of the Rings is my favourite film of all time. I love everything about it. I would have loved to have had the balls to attempt a retelling of Tolkien’s epic tale…but I don’t. So instead I borrowed some aspects of LOTR. Location, for example. One of my favourite things about LOTR is that it is as much a physical journey as it is a mental one. Plus, you know, I’m a writer. I like to add to my characters hell whenever I can, and dumping them in unfamiliar landscapes while they had this epic task to undertake was just too perfect. And then of course, there was the idea that this one tiny thing (a ring) could cause so much trouble and make even the most loyal of people turn rogue.
…and I’m going to stop now because my spoiler senses are tingling. I’m a bit of a sponge when it comes to inspiration. I find a little bit of something in everything, but these three things were definitely responsible for shaping In Stone.
BOOK BLURB
Beau Bailey is suffering from a post-break-up meltdown when she happens across a knife in her local park and takes it home. Less than a week later, the new boy in school has her trapped in an alley; he’s sprouted horns and is going to kill Beau unless she hands over the knife.
Until Eighteenth-century gargoyle, Jack, shows up to save her.
Jack has woken from a century-long slumber to tell Beau that she’s unwittingly been drafted into a power struggle between two immortal races: Demons and Gargoyles. The knife is the only one in existence capable of killing immortals and they’ll tear the world apart to get it back. To draw the warring immortals away from her home, Beau goes with Jack in search of the mind-bending realm known as the Underworld, a place where they’ll hopefully be able to destroy the knife and prevent all hell from breaking loose. That is, provided they can outrun the demons chasing them
In Stone is available from Amazon, Barnes & Noble and Kobo. You can also add it to your Goodreads list here.
EXCERPT

Louise. I told you she was gorgeous.
As a general rule, nobody walks the Switch on account of the overgrown nettle bushes, a pungent aroma of foot infection, and a collective fear of encountering something feral. However, the Switch shaves at least ten minutes off my journey, and lately I don’t trust the dark. I blame my encounter with the almost-corpse, two nights ago. Before then the dark was just a natural progression: something to be slept in, a different color in the sky. Now, shadows make me jump, and the dark carries a silence that makes me think of funerals. It breathes life into creatures that had always been safely contained behind a TV screen. I make my way down the Switch, striding over vicious flora and trying to ignore the occasional nip that sinks straight through my jeans.
“Hey, Beau!” A voice from behind startles me. When I turn, Gray is jogging in my direction, thwarting thorn bushes with his bare hands. “I was looking for you.”
The hairs on the back of my neck bristle. My hand is in my pocket, and my fingers are wrapped around a slender cylinder of pepper spray as he reaches me.
“Well you found me. What’s up?”
“There’s something I need to ask you,” he says sheepishly. He hammers his toe against the ground, grinding it nervously into the dirt and crushing several stems of dandelion into gold dust. He giggles; it’s a soft, sweet sound that suffocates my hostility. He reminds me of Mark moments before he’d asked me out on our first date. Maybe this guy could be the one to liberate me from my social network sabbatical. Maybe my slightly-too-heavy eyeliner and my reputation as the mortician’s daughter hasn’t freaked him out.
“Really?” Surprise raises my pitch. “What’s that?” The pepper spray is abandoned in my pocket.
“Where’s the knife?” he replies, snatching my throat and slamming my back up against the concrete wall. It’s so forceful, so hard, that my spine ripples. Red flashes across my vision. The muscles in my neck go slack, and my head flops forward. He stabs his thumb up under my chin, forcing me to look him in the eye. His eyes are like the moon; cold, giant circles of icy-silver. But a change in his eye color is nothing in comparison to the change happening on either side of his head. I don’t understand it. It makes me wonder, briefly, if what I’m seeing is a side effect of the migraine pills Leah slipped me at lunch. Gray is growing horns. Giant grey horns that slide out of the side of his skull and then curl like springs around his ears. They’re animal.
Pitcharama: it’s here!
Posted: June 14, 2013 Filed under: On writing | Tags: aussie-owned, contests, queries, small presses, young adult Leave a commentGot a completed manuscript? Want a chance to put your pitch in front of the eyes of eight small press editors? Now is your chance. Go go go! (NOTE: If you don’t have a blog but want to enter anyway, post your pitch here in the comments section of this post on my blog as per the original requirements, and then link it here on the linky list.)
Ladies and gentlemen, it’s the time you’ve all been waiting for… Pitcharama is here! *Insert trumpeting fanfare*
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A couple of reviews: ‘Stormdancer’ and ‘Archon’
Posted: April 4, 2013 Filed under: Reviews | Tags: aussie-owned, book covers, reviews, steampunk, young adult Leave a commentThis is just a quick update from me to let you know that in the last week I’ve posted a couple of reviews over at Aussie Owned and Read, if you want to check them out. Even if you don’t, just take a moment to admire the cover art for both of them. Gorgeous!
The first is for Stormdancer by Jay Kristoff, an awesome steampunk set in an alternate feudal Japan.

The US and UK covers of Stormdancer
The other is for Archon by Sabrina Benulis, which is about angels and the end of the world, set on a fictional island run by the Vatican.

The cover of Archon
Writers and publishers: do not do this to your readers!
Posted: February 23, 2013 Filed under: On Books, On writing | Tags: book covers, reviews, writing, young adult 14 CommentsI just finished a book that had what I’d have to say is the worst ending of all time. I know that’s a big call, but bear with me and I’m sure you’ll agree. Now, normally I wouldn’t name and shame the book, but in this case I don’t actually blame the author. I’d be surprised if the crime against readers that is the ending of this book was her idea.

Redeeming feature: the cover is lovely
The book is “Red Riding Hood” by Sarah Blakley-Cartwright.
I knew there was a movie based on the book—there’s a little fake sticker on the front that says “Now a major motion picture”. What I didn’t know when I bought it was that the book was actually written after the screenplay; they got Blakley-Cartwright in to write the novelisation. That’s why she has joint billing on the front of the book—the other guy is the screenplay writer. A lot of the oddities in the storytelling style (the omniscient third person narrator; the choppy, short scenes) clearly fall out of this process.
But the worst thing by far—which took the book from being an interesting horror/mystery to being an abomination—is that the publishers have printed the book without the last chapter.
I don’t just mean that the last chapter sucks or the story doesn’t finish. I mean that the final chapter of the book has actually been excised from the paperback. When you get to where it should be a web address refers you to the movie’s website, where the missing chapter is available as “bonus material”.
Don’t get me started on the idea of labeling the critical part of the novel I spent money on as a “bonus”!
Apparently the novel came out before the movie, and someone was worried that it would spoil the movie. Or decided that if people could read the ending of the book (and find out who the “Wolf” was, which was the mystery element) they wouldn’t want to see the movie. Never mind the fact that readers across the world have been managing to read books before movies for decades. Some people actually prefer to do it that way.
So the extra chapter wasn’t actually released onto the website till after the movie came out. I can’t imagine how furious I’d be if I’d bought the book beforehand and had to wait. I am frustrated enough as it is!
Withholding the end of a book from the readers isn’t a clever marketing strategy or a way to build hype. It’s insulting, and deprives readers of something they’ve (probably) paid good money for. I’m glad I bought this book secondhand. I feel less ripped off.
The other thing to consider is that a lot of book readers actually like to keep books they love on their shelves, to reread them or as a collector’s item. I’m one of those—I have shelves filled with books that I love. I would have kept this book (like I said, it’s not bad, and the cover is pretty), except it’s incomplete. What am I meant to do? Print the ten extra pages and stick them in the back? Yeah, that’s not going to happen…
I know I’m getting my ranty pants on here, but I felt extremely ripped off when I finished this book. I lay up past midnight fuming about it. (I know, I need to take a chill pill.) And I hear ranting is what blogs are all about!
I think the main lesson for writers (and publishers) is not to promise things you aren’t going to deliver in your book. If you’ve got a meta-plot arc that runs over the course of several books, that’s okay, but you’ve got to give a reader some closure at the end of your novel if you don’t want them throwing the book across the room.
Now I’m going to take a deep breath and move on. Thanks for letting me rant.
Info dumps and wilful ignorance
Posted: February 6, 2013 Filed under: On writing | Tags: editing, writing, young adult 8 CommentsI just finished a young adult (YA) novel that I wasn’t a huge fan of. I considered writing a review, but thought that rather than naming and shaming it might be more beneficial to instead outline the two main reasons I didn’t like the book. As a writer, I’ve found I learn just as much from bad books as good ones. Maybe I can share my learning without inflicting the object of the lesson on you directly!
This particular book was originally self-published. After it had good sales, it had a quick copy edit done (I presume, as some of the Goodreads reviews mentioned typos and I didn’t see any) and was then published in traditional form. You could tell it hadn’t felt a structural editor’s deft hand, though, because many of my objections were all things a good editor could have fixed.
Info dumps
The book featured a supernatural race and a main character who didn’t know she was part of that race: all fairly standard for YA urban fantasy (hell, my book has them!). The author clearly wanted to establish early on the signs the character was different—but it was done awkwardly, by way of the narrator explaining things to the reader in a giant info dump. You’re probably familiar with the concept of “show, don’t tell”. This was all tell.
Also, none of the supernatural indicators were that striking. The race easily passed for human. So it wasn’t “by the way, I have a tail and cloven hooves”, it was “by the way, I don’t like seafood and the colour pink” (yes, I made those up). It made the main character look fussy and difficult, although it was clear to me as a reader what was going on.
The end result of all this was that it took me out of the story and made me notice the (poor) craft. As a writer, taking your reader out of the story is the number one thing you want to avoid.
Wilful ignorance as a plot device
The author clearly wanted to dole out information about the race and its society over the course of the first half of the book. I get that. A slow reveal, when handled well, can be like a strip tease, making you stick around to see just a little bit more…
Unfortunately, in this case, it wasn’t at all sexy. Because it resulted in the main character not asking obvious questions, which made her look stupid, callous or both.
Likewise, the supporting characters, who were meant to be inducting her into her race, kept her deliberately ignorant when it made no sense for them to. And then they had the nerve to scold her when she did the wrong thing out of that ignorance! In one example, one guy told the leading lady it wasn’t his place to explain something—only to explain that same thing a chapter or two later with no indication of why he’d changed his mind. I wanted to slap him upside the head. With a semitrailer.
It’s challenging to have a “discovery” storyline when the teachers know everything and the reader and main character don’t. Managing the reveal is tricky. I get it. But if the reader starts to get frustrated and feels like they are being deliberately kept in the dark, you’ve pulled them out of the story again.
Another example of wilful ignorance was when, at the end of the book, the main character abruptly decided to do something that seemed out of character (based on her previous actions), justified by some extremely flimsy logic. Presumably this was to set up the start of the sequel, but it bugged me enough that I doubt I’ll ever know…
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The Next Big Thing blog hop (aka tag, I’m it)
Posted: January 2, 2013 Filed under: On the Isla's Inheritance trilogy | Tags: blog hop, Isla's Inheritance, urban fantasy, young adult 4 CommentsThe lovely Katie tagged me about three weeks ago to participate in a blog hop (I’ve since also been tagged by Ruth). If you’ve never seen a blog hop before, the premise seems to be that one theme unites a bunch of posts by different bloggers, with the aim of drawing people to new blogs they otherwise might not see. Like a giant pyramid scheme: you’re tagged by one person and tag five more. But without the requirement that you send me cash! (Unless you want to. Oh, go on! Please send me cash!)
The thing is, Katie tagged me before I even had a blog. So here I am. Better (fashionably) late than never, right?
I always was a little slow.
So here are my ten questions:
What is the working title of your book?
Isla’s Inheritance.
The sequel is currently going under the sexy title of “Book Two”. What can I say—I suck at naming things.
Where did the idea come from for the book?
Psychic vampires. You know the ones: they feed on your BRAINWAVES! Like zombies, but with less mess. There aren’t actually any vampires in my book, psychic or otherwise … but that’s where the idea came from. Then I added in faeries to the pot, and stirred.
What genre does your book fall under?
Young adult urban fantasy. I’ve had at least one person describe it as paranormal—I have a scene with a ouija board. But there are more faeries.
Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition?
This is far and away the hardest question of the ten. Especially since I rarely watch movies, so I have no idea who the current crop of young actors are. So here are some older actors. Imagine them younger. :p
Isla – Emma Watson
Sarah – Molly C Quinn
Dominic – David Tennant
Jack – Jamie Campbell Bower
What is the one-sentence synopsis of your book?
When Isla discovers her mother is an aosidhe—one of the fae ruling class—she must come to terms with her father’s deception and her own, sinister new abilities in order to save him.
Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?
Represented by an agency. If the stars align and I can find that agent that loves me and hugs me and calls me George. Or Cassandra. Or even just offers to represent me. I’m not that fussy. And the hugging might be a bit weird.
How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript?
I had the first ~10k words sitting there for years. Once I actually sat down and picked it up again, it took me about twelve months (give or take) to finish. Another six to edit, including getting feedback from beta readers.
Book Two took me about eight months to draft from scratch. I’m getting faster!
What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?
It’s a supernatural coming of age tale. I didn’t write it with a particular book in mind or anything, but I’m sure there are others out there.
I gather that Julie Kagawa’s Iron Fey books have a half-human teenage girl as the main character. But I haven’t read them. I will eventually—I really should—but I heard of them when I was partway through drafting Isla’s Inheritance and I thought if I read them I’d only see whatever similarities there were and lose hope. And maintaining the momentum can be tricky enough as it is, especially for the first book, when you’re full of self-doubt and haven’t yet proven to yourself that you can do it.
That being said, I’ve read the basic premise and, other than the main characters’ genetics, I think my books have very little in common with Kagawa’s. Maybe I’ll add reading the first one to my list of resolutions for next year.
Who or what inspired you to write this book?
I’ve always loved urban fantasy; it’s my favourite genre. Of course, I didn’t used to know that was what the genre was called. I used to call them “novels that are set in the real world, but with a supernatural element”. I told you I suck at naming things!
What else about your book might pique the reader’s interest?
It’s set in Australia. Isla’s father moved here from England in order to avoid the consequences of the actions that led to Isla’s birth … which I won’t elaborate on here. (Spoilers!)
And I tag…
I’m meant to tag five other blogger writers for this, but I’ve been nosing around and it seems the ones I thought might be interested have already done it. I really am late to the party… Anyway, if you’re interested, let me know in the comments (with a link to your blog) and I’ll edit you in! 🙂



