Interview: Kristen Strassel, new adult author

Last week over at Aussie Owned and Read I interviewed Julie, half of the Undead Duo. I’m now thrilled to have her partner in crime, Kristen Strassel, to my blog for a visit. Kristen is a vampire smut peddler, hair band fan, makeup artist and lover of live music. Her debut release, Because the Night, came out last month, and the prequel, Seasons in the Sun, comes out on 4 December. That’s right: TODAY!

Because the Night

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Because the Night is set in Las Vegas. It seems like the perfect place for a bunch of debauched vampire rock stars; although it’s sunny I hear those casinos are so huge you can quite happily never see the light of day! How did you choose the setting?

Hi Cassandra!  Thanks for having me on here!  Las Vegas really chose me. I had a dream about ten years ago about a girl trying to make her way in Vegas. Something about the dream stuck with me so much I actually moved to Vegas to write a book about it! Turns out my friend must have left the TV on, because when I saw the movie Showgirls it bore a striking resemblance to the dream. But the experience was invaluable research for Because the Night.

Sure, there’s plenty of sunshine in Las Vegas, but it’s Sin City. Dark, sensual, anything goes. The more I started putting the story together, the more it couldn’t have been set anywhere else. What other city in the world could vampires capitalize on what they are without anyone really believing they had anything to worry about?

Tell us a bit about the leading lads, Tristan and Blade. Are they both vampires? Which is the sexy one on the cover? Because damn!

Tristan is on the cover, and I know, right? He’s a pretty reasonable facsimile of what Tristan looks like to me. Tristan is a vampire, and he’s the rock star. He’s always been trouble, which led him to the afterlife. Callie’s never been able to resist him, which brought her to Vegas. But Blade is the one who made her stay. Blade is everything Tristan isn’t. First and foremost, he’s alive. He leads a normal life, and understands there’s a time for fun and a time for responsibility. Tristan has no idea what responsibility even means.

I know you’re a huge live music fan. Did any real-life rock bands inspire Immortal Dilemma?

I love going to concerts. There’s nothing quite like the feeling of seeing your favourite band play their songs live in front of you. The emotion, the energy…it’s sexy. There’s no better word for it.

Immortal Dilemma was inspired by Motley Crue.  They’re perfect because even though there’s that undertone of debauchery, women love them. Nikki Sixx has died twice. So anyone who’s done that and lived to tell about it deserves to have a fictional character based on them. He was my inspiration for Tristan.

Everyone’s publishing journey is different. What is the number one thing you’ve learned so far on yours?

This is a tough question! I would have to say Expect the Unexpected. And adapt. When you’re writing your novel, everything is in your control. Once you make the decision to publish it, from the minute you send out that first query, you are handing control over to someone else. I think that the concept of “dream agents” and “dream publishers” as a debut author is exactly that—a dream. In the beginning, you work with the people who say yes. It’s just the reality of the situation when you’re starting out. You have to earn your bargaining chips. I never expected Because the Night to have the journey it did, but I’m happy with where I’m at and where the book is at right now. At the end of the day, you have to do what is right for you. You don’t have to answer to or apologize to anyone for what you do.

What’s it like having a childhood friend who lives near you as a crit partner? (Can you tell I’m jealous?)

Because the Night probably wouldn’t have existed without Julie. Remember I told you about moving to Vegas to write a book? Yeah, that book didn’t get written. Until Julie one night worked up the nerve to tell me she was working on a vampire novel, which is Running Home. I said, “You know, I’ve had one that I haven’t been able to put together in the right way and finish.” So we worked together, we finished the books, and we brought them to the world.

We get together about once a week these days. Pizza and adult beverages are usually involved. Our meetings have evolved as our journey has. Before it was just about the writing. Now business has crept in as well.  We don’t always agree on everything, but that’s what makes for a good partnership.

KristenStrasselI asked Julie this and now I’m asking you: what’s the one question you wish an interviewer would ask you and they never do?

On my bio, I allude to the fact I’ve worked a lot of different jobs. It took me a long time to find my path in life. I think that’s why I’m so attracted to the New Adult category. I’ve started over a lot. College wasn’t for me, and I worked a lot of dead end jobs that I hated. When I was younger, I didn’t have the confidence to reinvent myself so easily, and at one point I actually had to come to terms with the fact that my dreams were never going to come true. The turning point for me was when I lost a lot of weight—almost 100 lbs. (which has since come and gone several times). It made me realize that if you wanted something badly enough, you could make anything happen.

Coffee or tea?

Coffee. Please and thank you.

Plotter or pantser?

Both, really. I pants until I hit a wall and then I outline what I’ve got and write down ideas for what needs to happen next.

Morning or night?

A very reluctant morning person. I have to be up sometimes in the 3 AM hour for work, and it’s always very unpredictable, so I don’t like to get too off schedule. But I do love the nightlife.

Sneaking into nightclubs to see bands since she was sixteen, Kristen has been researching Because the Night her whole life. Now she’s been to more concerts that she could possibly count. She gets an up close and personal look at the behind the scenes workings of the entertainment industry doing makeup and hair for TV, movies and commercials. She’s a graduate of the School of Hard Knocks and Blaine Beauty School. She enjoys watching football, decorating her house, and making wickedly decadent desserts she force feeds to all her guests. She does not have a Boston accent. You can find Kristen on Goodreads, at her blog or on Twitter.


Book launch, excerpt and giveaway: ‘Sleeper’ by S.M. Johnston

"Sleeper" by S. M. Johnston

“Sleeper” by S. M. Johnston

Title: Sleeper (Book I in the Toy Soldiers series)

Author: S. M. Johnston

Release Date: December 2, 2013 (TODAY!)

Publisher: Entranced Publishing, Rush Imprint

Genre: Upper YA/NA speculative fiction

Blurb:

A new heart should mean new life, not a living nightmare.

Mishca Richardson’s life is at an all-time high after her heart transplant. With new boyfriend, Ryder, the two of them have the perfect summer romance. Even the nightmares that have been plaguing her sleep since her operation can’t dull the high she’s on.

Things start to unravel as Mishca develops superhuman abilities. She does her best to hide them so as not to end up a science experiment in a lab. But she can’t ignore the instant attraction she experiences when she meets her university professor, Colin Reed.

Torn between the blossoming love and the obsession, Mishca must decide if she wants Ryder or Colin. But the organization responsible for her changes and her connection to Colin, is moving to secure Mishca for himself so that she can be the weapon he always intended her to be. If Mishca can’t resist her programming she’ll have a lot more to worry about than romance.

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Excerpt:

SOMEONE WILL DIE SO I can live. I’ve come to terms with that. It used to turn my stomach, how my donor might die, but now I’m used to it. It’ll most likely be a car accident or a drunken fall from a height, especially at this time of year, with all the end-of-school parties. But not from illness or any other “natural” causes. A violent, painful death will be my savior. That’s how I will get my new heart.

I open my eyes and stare upwards, hoping the white, fluffy clouds that splotch against the blue sky will distract me from the images of people dying that flow through my head. I guess I’m not as used to the idea of getting someone else’s heart as I thought. The harsh Australian sun brings beads of sweat to my brow and a squint to my eyes. I swing my legs around and hoist myself upright on the stadium bleacher, looking out over the sports field. I readjust the singlet strap that had slipped off my shoulder and try to think happier thoughts. At least I won’t be responsible for the person who dies so I can get a new heart.

Yeah, happier thoughts.

I let out a sigh. This is not how I expected to be spending my schoolies week, with my dad as he puts hopeful rugby league players through their paces. My friends are all doing the traditional, Aussie, end-of-high-school celebration with a weeklong party, but instead of Airlie or the Gold Coast, they’re all in Bali, where I should be. It’s the big party to start our summer holidays before we find out which university we’ve been accepted into. When Mum and Dad found out I was at the top of the transplant list, they vetoed my November plans in case someone croaks this week. So all my friends left, minus me. I know it’s because Mum and Dad care. They’ve proved time and time again that you don’t need blood ties to be great parents, or overprotective ones.

“All right, boys. That wraps it up for today,” Dad calls out to the pack of sweaty guys. “Hit the showers, and I’ll see you all tomorrow.”

I do my best not to stare as the group heads towards me. Half of them are shirtless, their muscles glistening after the training session. Okay, so I’m staring. A cute, red-haired guy catches me looking and winks. So, I reward him with a smile. A guy from school, who obviously chose a potential sporting career over a party week, nudges Cutie Ginger and then shakes his head. I hold back a huff. I thought with the end of an era, I could have a fresh start, but my reputation looks like it will haunt me beyond high school. Mishca the untouchable.

Dad lingers behind, deep in discussions with the managers and trainers, no doubt discussing the fates of the young men desperate to break into rugby league at a national level. They were all trying so hard to get Coach Tom Richardson’s attention. If only I had that many guys chasing after me. I wipe the sweat that’s formed at the edge of my almost afro, before it trickles down my brow. Yuck. Finally, Dad makes his way towards me, leaving his entourage behind.

“So, any contenders in your latest batch of victims?” I ask, picking up my discarded copy of West Side Story. I’d been rereading my university audition piece, torturing myself on how I could have performed it better. I wish I had tried out for plays at school, but I was a closet actor, only performing in drama class for fear that somehow my weak disposition would get in the way.

But next year will be different. A new heart and new hope.

“There may be some. Tomorrow will be the clincher,” Dad replies, humouring me. He knows I’m not that interested in his latest player acquisitions. He puts his hand on my shoulder. “I’ve got to grab some paperwork from the office before we go.”

“Sure thing,” I say to his back as he retreats up the tunnel under the stadium. I trudge behind him, my book clutched in my hand. With each step the tips of my curls brush lightly against my bare shoulders. It tickles and I regret agreeing with Mum to grow my hair out. I shove my hands into the pockets of my denim shorts and focus on the cool shade I’ll get once I’m inside.

My nose wrinkles the moment I step in the door. The whole place smells like dude, and not in a good way, but in the male equivalent of a stinky, wet dog way. I walk down the corridor and lean against the cool cement wall outside Dad’s office.

My heart transplant operation is like a ticking time bomb waiting to go off, only there’s no countdown to watch. Evil thoughts invade my mind again, only now about my parents.

Would they still have wanted to adopt me if they’d known I had a congenial heart disease, or in simpler terms, a hole in my heart?

“SLEEPER is a fast-paced adventure filled with mystery, romance, action, and humor. Mishca and Ryder rank up there with my favorite heroines and heroes ever! S.M. Johnston is an author to watch out for.” ~Wendy Higgins, author of Sweet Evil, Sweet Peril, and Sweet Reckoning.

Sharon M. Johnston

Sharon M. Johnston

About the author:

Sharon is a writer from Mackay in Queensland, Australia who has short stories published in anthologies and was also runner-up in the Australian Literary Review’s Young Adult short story contest with KARMA. By day she is a public relations executive and by night she writes weird fiction and soulful contemporaries while her husband, two sons and cat are fast asleep.

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Interview and giveaway: Julie Hutchings, author of ‘Running Home’

Today over at Aussie Owned and Read I had the pleasure of interviewing the awesome Julie Hutchings. There’s also an ebook giveaway – you could win one of TWO copies of “Running Home”! 🙂

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Today I’m interviewing Julie Hutchings: black belt, beer drinker, harpy, and at least fifty percent of the Undead Duo. When she’s not doing those things, she’s a horror and urban fantasy writer, and one of my very favourite people on Twitter. Welcome to Aussie Owned and Read, Julie!

Running HomeYour debut, Running Home, came out in August this year. When I read the blurb (which totally made me order the paperback from Amazon, by the way), I thought it sounded like vampires mixed with wasabi and tears. How would you describe it? And are you going to break my heart?

Thank you for having me on Aussie Owned and Read! And for buying my book. 🙂 Oooooh, I really do like that description! But it’s better suited for the sequel which will take place in Japan. Running Home is more of a warm, fuzzy Christmas story but with blood…

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Editing to music

I don’t write to music much (unless I need it to block out some other, more annoying sound — like my son watching kids TV). Usually it’s about the silence for me.

But I can edit to music. This song is what has gotten me through NaNoEditMo. Well, this and the rest of the Perfect Tripod album it’s from.

Shared for your aural enjoyment. (Also, I have a MASSIVE geek crush on Scod, the guy on the far right with the glasses. This is one reason I can’t write romance — most romance readers seem to prefer beefcake. I don’t do beefcake.)


Interview: Zara Hoffman, teen author

Today I’m interviewing Zara Hoffman, the amazing sixteen-year-old author of The Belgrave Daughter, which is being released…today! How exciting! Hi, Zara—welcome to my blog.

18467181Your story has a combination of sorcery, angels and demons—three of my favourite things in a book! Tell us a little about Fawn, your main character.

Fawn is a strong young lady who values family, friends, and trust above all else. She’ll do anything for those she loves. She’s very intelligent, but tends to lose focus when Caleb is around. Oh, and did I mention she’s the most powerful witch on the planet? Talk about a heavy destiny to bear. And she’s only twenty years old—but at least she has her best friend Ivy and brother Alec to help her along the way.

What’s Caleb like? I’m imagining a hot bad boy, with motorcycle leathers and a pair of sunglasses—am I close? 🙂

Haha. I’m sure Caleb has taken up that appearance at least once or twice in his two hundred years as an angel, but he’s more of a laid back, jeans and a t-shirt guy when he’s with Fawn. He’s actually very similar to her in that he, too, loves his family more than anything and is willing to do many morally questionable things in his quest to reunite with them. But here’s a secret: he’s my favorite character of the story.

How do you want your readers to feel when they turn the last page of your book?

I want people to feel…hopeful? I’m sure when readers reach the ending they might want to throw things at my head, but I want people to feel disillusioned from the perfect romance that is in a lot of romance books, YA especially, and know that relationships are hard work—but not unattainable, and worth fighting for.

I know you researched traditional publishing extensively before choosing to self-publish. What was the thought process behind that decision?

My decision was in the making for a long time. While I loved the idea of being chosen by a literary agency or a publisher, the creative independence I’d be giving up didn’t seem worth it. For my first book, I wanted the story to be my vision, not some transformed version that wasn’t my intention. Also, I’m creative enough to know what I want on the cover and to format myself, and entrepreneurial enough to promote my own book, so I decided to go the self-publishing route. Maybe later in my writing career I’ll try for traditional, or maybe not. Only time will tell on that one.

What is the most important thing you’ve learned on your self-publishing journey?

That rushing is the death to creativity and progress. Okay, maybe that’s a bit melodramatic, but rushing through something just for the sake of being able to say “I’m done” only creates stress and hassle. It’s not worth it. Take the extra time, turn out a better book, and be happier in the end.

What advice would you give to other teenagers who are writing their first novel?

I would say to write the story in your heart. If that happens to be one that caters to a popular trend, or completely goes against it, just write it. You’ll only be happy with a project that inspires your enthusiasm. How else would you be able to survive the long haul of writing a novel? And don’t expect it to be perfect. Revisions and edits are necessary. It’s a fact, but even though it’s long and involves lots of work, you can make it fun! And it’ll be worth it!

The Septemgeminus Prophecy states: “A powerful sorceress with blood laced in gold sevenfold shall determine the fate of the world.

Fawn Belgrave’s magical powers are the coveted prize in a bet between God and the Devil.

When she meets Caleb, the dark angel assigned to seduce her, Fawn’s life is turned upside down.

Zara Hoffman is a teen author. She spends most of her time doing homework and writing new stories. When she isn’t wrapped up in projects, Zara can be found relaxing with friends and family, listening to music, reading and writing, or playing with her dog, Riley. You can find her at her website, on Facebook or on Twitter.

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Cover reveal: ‘The Other Me’ by Suzanne van Rooyen

Title: The Other Me

Author: Suzanne van Rooyen

Release Date: 19 December 2013

Publisher: Harmony Ink Press

Genre: YA, LGBT, contemporary

Fifteen-year-old Treasa Prescott thinks she’s an alien. She doesn’t fit in with the preppy South African private school crowd and feels claustrophobic in her own skin. Treasa is worried she might spend life as a social pariah when she meets Gabriel du Preez. Gabriel plays the piano better than Beethoven, has a black belt in karate, and would look good wearing a garbage bag. Treasa thinks he’s perfect. It might even be love, as long as Gabriel doesn’t find out she’s a freak.

As Treasa spends time with Gabriel, she realizes she might not love him as much as she wants to be him, and that the reason she feels uncomfortable in her skin might have less to do with extra-terrestrial origins and more to do with being born in the wrong body.

But Gabriel is not the perfect boy Treasa imagines. He harbors dark secrets and self-destructive tendencies. Still, Treasa might be able to accept Gabriel’s baggage if he can accept who she longs to be.

Add The Other Me on Goodreads now! And enter the giveaway to win a $15 Amazon giftcard HERE!!

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Suzanne is an author and peanut-butter addict from South Africa. She currently lives in Finland and finds the cold, dark forests nothing if not inspiring. Although she has a Master’s degree in music, Suzanne prefers conjuring strange worlds and creating quirky characters. When not writing you can find her teaching dance and music to middle-schoolers or playing in the snow with her shiba inu. She is rep’d by Jordy Albert of the Booker Albert Agency.

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Cover reveal: ‘Forget Me Not’ by Stacey Nash

I have read one of Stacey’s books — although not this one (yet!) — and can assure you she has serious game. Also, she is one of the contributors over at Aussie Owned and Read and one of the loveliest people you could ever hope to meet. So I’m very excited to be a part of this cover reveal.

Title: Forget Me Not (Book I in the Collective series)

Author: Stacey Nash

Release Date: 17 February 2014

Publisher: Entranced Publishing, Rush Imprint

Genre: YA speculative fiction

Since her mother vanished nine years ago, Anamae and her father have shared a quiet life. But when Anamae discovers a brooch identical to her mother’s favorite pendant, she unknowingly invites a slew of trouble into their world. When the brooch and the pendant are worn together they’re no longer pretty pieces of jewelry — they’re part of a highly developed technology capable of cloaking the human form. Triggering the jewelry’s power attracts the attention of a secret society determined to confiscate the device — and silence everyone who is aware of its existence. Anamae knows too much, and now she’s Enemy Number One.

She’s forced to leave her father behind when she’s taken in by a group determined to keep her safe. Here Anamae searches for answers about this hidden world. With her father kidnapped and her own life on the line, Anamae must decide if saving her dad is worth risking her new friends’ lives. No matter what she does, somebody is going to get hurt.

Add Forget Me Not on Goodreads now! And enter the giveaway HERE!! You can win a pre-release Advance Reader Copy (ARC) of Forget Me Not, a $20 Amazon gift card, or (for the writers) a first chapter critique. I’ve had Stacey crit my stuff before. Believe me, you want this!

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Reviews:

Nash brings a secret world to life with these amazing characters.”

“I’d definitely recommend this book to anyone who enjoys action, intrigue and romance.”

“It’s an incredible story with great action, a swoon-worthy romance, and twists you won’t see coming!”

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About the Author:Stacey Nash (3) Stacey grew up in the Hunter Valley of New South Wales. It is an area nestled between mountains and vineyards. Full of history and culture, it provides wonderful writing inspiration. After dabbling with poetry during her teen years, Stacey stopped writing until after university when she was married with young children. Now she loves nothing more than spending her days with her children and writing when inspiration strikes.

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Winter Warmers blog hop

Once upon a time, a wonderful writer and blogger named Blue was tagged in a blog hop called the Summer Sun Award. Because Blue is a rebel, she decided to go along with the blog hop, but when she tagged people to participate she flipped it on its head, renaming it Winter Warmers.

And, in a great sense of irony because it actually is summer here next month, she tagged me. 😉

Favourite song with winter in the title or lyrics.

Confession: I could only think of Winter Wonderland when I pondered this question. And it’s ok, but not my favourite. Then I thought, hey, maybe I could make the question “favourite song about winter or Christmas”. Then I chose White Wine in the Sun by Tim Minchin, which (when I listened to it as I was preparing this blog post) made me cry.

Gee, thanks, Tim. :p

Ironically, it’s about an Australian Christmas anyway — white wine in the sun might not go down so well at Christmas in England. Which makes it about summer. I’m a rebel like that.

Favourite book about winter

My most recent favourite would have to be The Memory Game by Sharon Sant. It’s not about winter, per se, but winter plays an important role.

Here’s the blurb:

18741309If there is a hell, I think maybe this is it.’

Weeks after fifteen-year-old David is killed by a speeding driver, he’s still hanging around and he doesn’t know why. The only person who can see and hear him is the girl he spent his schooldays bullying.

Bethany is the most hated girl at school. She hides away, alone with her secrets until, one day, the ghost of a boy killed in a hit-and-run starts to haunt her.

Together, they find that the end is only the beginning…

I should warn you, though — this book made me cry like a baby!

Favourite “hot” winter film

I’ve been sitting here thinking and thinking, and I’ve got nothing. I’m just not a film person. The only cold scene I could even think of from a movie that I love is from Fellowship of the Ring, where they try and cross the mountain, and Legolas is showing off by walking on top of the snow.

So I’ll say pass to this question and lose a point. And know that once this post is up, I will think of ten or twelve different answers.

Favourite winter memory

Duns Castle. My future home.

Duns Castle. My future home.

In 2011, we went to Scotland. It was a scorching Australian summer here, so we arrived in the depths of a northern hemisphere winter. All the locals thought we were barmy for choosing that time of year to visit, but that’s alright. Besides, we stayed in a castle for four nights, and who wouldn’t love that? It would’ve been perfect if it had snowed, but it held off till the day we left.

That being said, what’s not to love about a roaring fireplace someone else has stoked when it’s freezing outside?

I also have an enduring memory of driving along a country road through an area where it had snowed, and seeing a tree totally covered in snow and ice crystals. It was breathtaking.

Favourite winter holiday destination

Somewhere warm. Unless it’s a castle.

What books will be in your suitcase this winter?

Well, given winter is just over six months away, that depends how slowly I read. It may be something on these shelves.

My to-be-read shelf has conducted a hostile takeover

My to-be-read shelf has conducted a hostile takeover

I’m also certain I’ll be reading and re-reading some of my own books in the interim, because Isla’s Inheritance comes out in the Australian spring, so there will be ALL OF THE PROOFING TO DO!

And I tag…

Stacey Nash

Katie Teller

Emily Mead

Karen Soutar

Lauren Spieller


Musical inspiration: Tripod vs the Dragon

Tortured bad guy inspiration. This. Watch it.

It’s from a (mostly) comedy DVD called Tripod vs the Dragon. I’ll give you one guess which one she’s playing.

(Note: there are two copies of this on YouTube — I’ve linked this one because it’s better quality but if you are watching this with small people around or the f-bomb bothers you, don’t watch the last two seconds of the clip. The song is safe though.)

I was made in darkest night
Of chalky ash and children’s fright
I do not think you know what you behold
I was made of aching hurt
Of fairy tales and bloody dirt
I hope you do exactly as you’re told

Siegfried and Saint George
Potter, Baggins, Beowulf
Were tempered in my forge
So I say to you and yours

All caught fire in the ivory tower
In the marble arches
In the dust and darkness
And I have you on my mind

Once a mighty tree was grown
For you to know all that is known
I hope you hear exactly what I say
And by your sword a branch came down
And where the blood fell to the ground
It is my cradle and there I must stay

And should ever you return
Well I must confess my story to be true
You will be burned
And I hope that you have learned:

All caught fire in the ivory tower
In the marble arches
In the dust and darkness
And all caught fire in the ivory tower
And I have you on my mind
You’re on my mind
You’re on my mind

I could watch this on repeat all day, if only YouTube had a repeat function. (Someone get onto that, will you?) I have the DVD too, but that’s less convenient. :p


Show, don’t tell

I’ve been in the edit cave since I finished Lucid Dreaming at the end of August. There’s been Isla’s Inheritance, Lucid Dreaming and now Isla’s Oath, as well as a couple of critiques for good friends. If there was a NaNoEditMo, I’d be totally caning it — even if the goal were more than the 50,000 that the NaNoWriMo folks are aiming for.

Dalek Advice

Weak prose: daleks say no

At least, that’s what I’m telling myself. (I’m not doing NaNoWriMo because I’m more of a NaNoSlowMo!)

Anyway, I always knew one of the writing mantras was show, don’t tell. But it wasn’t till after I went through my wonderful editor’s feedback on Isla’s Inheritance that I truly appreciated the breadth of this phrase.

It’s a funny expression, in a way. I mean, we’re writers. By definition, everything we do is telling, not showing. But the trick is to make the reader forget that you’re telling them. 😉

I always applied it to info dumps: those really boring parts of a book where you, say, summarised a piece of a character’s history. Better to have the character discuss said history in conversation — with someone who doesn’t know about it, obviously. (Don’t commit that awful crime you see on TV where characters repeat things to each other that no real person would, just to convey meaning to the reader/watcher. Ugh.)

That’s not to say that I didn’t have any info dumps in Isla’s Inheritance, but I managed to keep them under control for the most part. Or at least I recognised them when I saw them when I edited under my own steam, and cut them out.

But where I hadn’t fully applied show, don’t tell was in describing my character’s emotions, and in things she observed in the world around her. My manuscript was full of phrases like:

I felt guilty.

I heard sirens.

I saw him flinch.

Better to say:

My stomach churned with guilt.

The wail of sirens drew closer. (Or “The sirens’ wails drew closer”, if you’re on a passive sentence crusade.)

He flinched.

They convey the same meaning, but the latter set punches it up a notch. It’s the difference between telling someone a story and giving them the full immersion experience.

Show, don’t tell is my new favourite piece of advice. I may get it tattooed on my arm. (Ok, probably not, but it’s still a good one!)